Production on this is great. This sounds pro to me, excellent track! Lovin the little chord changes in the last 30 secs.

watch the sub bass, I guess that your monitors don't go down t5oo low - there seems to be a little too much at 20-30hz in your kick just a little)

I think you should give it 5 bpm more.

gets really quite nice at 2:25 ish

glad I downloaded this.

structure is slightly strange, and you could do a lot more with the perc.

it doesn't need the key-up aqround 4 - remove it and keep it on one note.

___________________
If I've been helpful and you have a spare minute, check out my soundcloud; clubshark soundcloud
http://www.clubsharkrecords.com

quote:

Originally posted by optik watch the sub bass, I guess that your monitors don't go down t5oo low - there seems to be a little too much at 20-30hz in your kick just a little) I think you should give it 5 bpm more. gets really quite nice at 2:25 ish glad I downloaded this. structure is slightly strange, and you could do a lot more with the perc. it doesn't need the key-up aqround 4 - remove it and keep it on one note.

Yeah, I know there's a lot of bass. It's supposed to be that way I like it phat About the structure and the note-change at the end - I'm extremely bored of following the same pattern and rulez when producing trance. But hey, everyone has their own taste. Thanx for downloading and replying Always interresting and helpful to read comments

___________________

tis cool - when it gets played in an a+r office with their huge genelec monitors it'll sound like mud soup tho - and on a club system it will be a little painful =(

___________________
If I've been helpful and you have a spare minute, check out my soundcloud; clubshark soundcloud
http://www.clubsharkrecords.com

quote:

Originally posted by optik tis cool - when it gets played in an a+r office with their huge genelec monitors it'll sound like mud soup tho - and on a club system it will be a little painful =(

Really? Ok, I'll try to keep the low frequenzies a lil bit more down next time then

___________________

=)

honest - just trying to help, was the reason I spent a lot on monitors, sat in a lot of A+R offices and listened to my stuff sounding like mud cause my home monitoring was hiding most of the sub bass - just needs a cut on the kcik at about 30hz - shouldn't make a lot of difference to the way it sounds on a home system but it'll make it punchier on good system (with large bass speakers) and club systems.

good track btw.

___________________
If I've been helpful and you have a spare minute, check out my soundcloud; clubshark soundcloud
http://www.clubsharkrecords.com

Sounds good, well done!


Akia