Hello.. This is an short sample of an new track i have work with.
Feel free to comment it, i would like to know what you think

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Peace.

Any? Maybe it wasnt that good, but I take every word i can get.

I liked the sample, but i am curious, is there anything rweally going on?, id prolly be best to hear the whole track, from what i have heard it sounds rather..normal, like everything else out there, not much to make it 'stand out' if you know what i mean, and you do have a very basic beat, try integrateing more, i sueualy have atleast 2 diffrent beats in my tracks, i i alternate for each climax etc, and sometimes a 'climax' beat, useualy has more going on then the first two.

Also, add some pads soemwhere heh, i think it would go great with some atmosphearic riseing 'ahh's at the break, when the main coems in from quiet to loud, a riseing 'AHH' in the background would imho make it sound mroe 'refreshing'

what synths did you use btw?

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Thanks, I know the track isnt that special, and yes there will be added more things in the full version
And this is far from the best i can do, and I just wanted to have something posted.
I think its pretty good and standard to be put out here, I hope atleast.
Mostly I was using Vanguard and Polysix.

Last edited by Kunisaki on Aug-04-2006 at 03:17

I liked it! I thought the mix was well done. I know there are some missing parts, but it has quite a bit of potential.

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Not a bad start! Some things I'd recommend be:
1) The bassline, try using what you have now, eq away all bottom from it (reverb on basslines with a lot of bass makes it messy at later stages). Then have another bassline with a nice bassy touch that has little high-end parts (like a square bass) and have it play between the kicks. Then throw those two into a bassline group and add compression and eq.

2) Percs, try adding a very subtle ping-pong delay to the hihats

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Sounds good, a bit empty but I like the melody. Keep it up!

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