Where do I take this? (House tune)

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PutBoy
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Registered: Dec 2004
Location: LA (Landskrona)

Where do I take this? (House tune)

So I started this tune up. It's rather simplistic as it is, and the thing I'm mostly attracted to is the bassline. Rolling sort of. Anyways, I'm stuck. Is this something to persue?

http://www.fileden.com/files/2967/project%20060806.mp3

There is something about it that just doesn't cut it, maybe it just needs something more...

I'm thinking about naming it lucid or something similar.

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Aug-08-2006 10:59 Sweden

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daeus
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Registered: Feb 2004
Location: London

This sounds like a casio keyboard demo lol.

Sorry it dosnt sound like house music to me.

Had another listen...take out that "childish" high notes thing thats going on over the bassline,then just build the song on that bassline if u can.

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mysticalninja
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Registered: May 2005
Location: Los Angeles

That bass line needs to be 1000x funkier. Overall song needs more FX and reverb too.

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Had another listen...take out that "childish" high notes thing thats going on over the bassline,then just build the song on that bassline if u can.

Agree, that lead just isn't doing it for me.

Check out my latest song, pretty housey. Now that's a house bass.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...A3163F07A336B55

Crit welcome.