Hmm here is what I would do with it.

All you have so far is the intro which is very good stuff actually.
You hear that part that keeps repeating throughout the song and can be heard especially at the end at the fade out,
I would isolate it after the fade out and drive it up gradually unit ll you reach max and then follow it by some fast bass beats and then the rest of the beats and the synths but with a harder bass and a higher volume for the repeating part.

I hope I was able to translate the music in my head into words correctly but hey at least I gave you an idea

I have an idea of what you mean. Thanx for your input, I will give it a go

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good job so far...i agree w/ DJ Berkat, you only have an intro....
here's my ideas...
during the fade out i hear some snare build up....i'd see this as right before the break down..which i would use two synths for...the synth that begins @ :46 - have this repeat then during each measure (whatever the timing happens to be) use the synth that begins @ :03.

at this point, maybe, if you had a note progression to run thru you could initiate it here with these two synths.

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You have read my mind. Im already there doing excactly that. I have also stuck more effects, sweeps and crashes on, and I have don a few little beat repeat trix and played about with the bit rate of the sound to give it that new edge. I will post it when I am finished. Thanx for your input friend

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