Sounds great! Thanks for sharing!


Akia

Hey Timothy,

Good beginning. Good build up too. Damn. Nice.

You need to pimp this song man, this is good sh--.

One thing though, I think the kick and bass line could be slightly louder. But the energy is definitly there.

nice job.

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good stuff there. seemed like the break down was longer than the build up, which came a bit quickly imo.

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Hey mate, really nice tune here. The melody is sweet and the production fits the style perfectly. I'm on less-than-best headphones today but it all sounds clear-as.
The only thing I reckon you could improve on is the build. While you've got the right idea, building tension nicely and resolving it when the chord progression kicks in, the build itself is pretty bland, it could use some crazy fx and shit over the top or something like that to keep it interesting.
Great tune all up

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Originally posted by Akia Sounds great! Thanks for sharing! Akia

thanks for listening

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Originally posted by marcusk Hey Timothy, Good beginning. Good build up too. Damn. Nice. You need to pimp this song man, this is good sh--. One thing though, I think the kick and bass line could be slightly louder. But the energy is definitly there. nice job.

Do you have any suggestion on how to pimp it?

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Originally posted by DjConfessions good stuff there. seemed like the break down was longer than the build up, which came a bit quickly imo.

I usually keep the buildup/intro around 2 minutes. Should be enough time for mixing it in with an other track i personally think. I'll think about making it longer the next time

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Originally posted by pho mo Hey mate, really nice tune here. The melody is sweet and the production fits the style perfectly. I'm on less-than-best headphones today but it all sounds clear-as. The only thing I reckon you could improve on is the build. While you've got the right idea, building tension nicely and resolving it when the chord progression kicks in, the build itself is pretty bland, it could use some crazy fx and shit over the top or something like that to keep it interesting. Great tune all up

thanks for the compliments. I was thinking of adding something similiar like outback or above & beyond type of fx to it in the first place, I'll add it in a new version to keep it more interesting

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