Hey Guys.....

Thank you for everyone who gave me comments and suggestions when i posted the demo.....

Now i finished the track... Check it out and Tell me how it is now.... I cleared up some sounds and did some serious work....

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here you go..... Comments are much expected and appreciated.....
This is one of my best tracks so far.....

Thanks Sammy aka Avenger aka Avengie

i think you need to eq the track. even at 320kbps it sounds cloudy, that is because of frequencies from different instruments overlapping each other. would sound much better then.

Little specific buddy...... hehe dont know what actually it is... this is supposed to be very atmospheric.... chilled trance..... it would be a really help if you tell me where should i actually eq....

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Originally posted by avengie would be a really help if you tell me where should i actually eq

avengie you should eq from scratch. eq each and every instrument on the mixer if possible. try to play them in solo and then some of them or all of them and decide how to eq. try to boost high frequencies. lower the low mid shelf. and boost the low shelf. after you do that add a parametric eq to the final mix. hope this helps. all the best

Anyone else?? thought i would get some other feedbacks....

yo mate, nice tune you got here! i really like the piano but it sounds a little crisp imo.. maybe synthesize it just a little or give it some more reverb. ive got nothing else to say.. maybe i could make a remix? hehe anyway nice one!


Bidor

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Thanks bidor....

Somebody else also said this one has only two things that has to be changed..... the length and the the electro arpaggio i have in the begginin....

Anyone else have anything to say??? I would loved to hear something...

the sound is quite fat which i like.

i think the bass is a bit weak. would like to hear it more dominant in the mix. try clearing your low end out so the bass and kick have their own space down there.

nice melodies in the breakdown quite belearic. would like to hear them more in the track afte the breakdown. i prefer them to the arp sound you have playing.

also i think you could cut a minute or two out of the track or if your going to keep the full nine minutes try and change the direction of the track like adding something spontaneous into it.

i like the flow of it overall definately good job this part. a bit of work and it could work for a set starter.

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Listening.

Nice introsynth. cool filtered percussions. nice drive.

1:55 Nice basschange. but the synth u had going from the beginning is begining to get annoying.

Break now.

Nice piano, nice synth coming in.

And i like the way you stop the synths in the break and bring in the percs and basschange.

But i feel the track sounds pretty flat. could use more hi-freq sounds especially in the percussion section. nice cymbal u bring in the track later on, kinda floats on top. And the piano adds a great touch to the track.

Overall. nice complete production, but sounds like some sounds are fighting a little bit for space. Nice work, but needs a little extra touch to it.

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nice stuff, i really like the first 2 minutes, and after that it gets a lil repetitious... try checkin details at EVERY bar.... because it's fun the way you play with the sounds... pretty damn hard, good for boiling point in a set!

cheers

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Wow

Thanks guys.... very much appreciate all the comments..... now im gonna clean this up a little and add some new stuff in.... i will post an update very soon....

Here guys..... The track is fixed....

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