Hey,

Pro:
+ has that kind of spacey "infinity" atmosphere I like.
+ good bassline, the subs, the mid presence, its all there and very tight.
+ synth work = nice
+ production quality pretty good.

Contra:
- that first lead synth has a little much of a distracting noise frequency, starting 1:30. Play a little with EQ to get rid of it.
- I dont really dig the rythm. Its not driving enough. Maybe try adding a snare?

Overall, your sound is quite professional. Not much left to say but good work, keep it up!

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8) hey cybernetica, hows it going. thanks for the detail review.

The opening synth sounds really digital, and this may turn of analog purest. Lucky for me, I like digital sounding things. I think you kick could be punchier. Either find a new sample or compress the piss out of it. The main saw lines you use have an interesting color to them, kinda this dreamy feel. I think you could have the track change up a bit, like maybe switch up the rhythems half way through.


Sounds nice overall, but when compared to pro releases it doesn't stand up.

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I like your sound a lot. Good work. Definately would buy this on vinyl.

8) hi guys, thanks alot for the review

Wow! That bass in the beginning is awesome sounding! Really nice!!! I love how the you have that synth slowly coming in.

Very nice!!!

Keep up the good work!

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