This is one of my first finished tracks, it's not totally finished, I'd like a few crits if anyone would like to make any!

Cheers

http://www.sendspace.com/file/yjr3oz

yo yo- cool percs. Like the weird vocals too lol. Maybe change the eq a bit to make the bass a bit crunchier?

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listening...

drums sound weak...vocal is neat i guess...

bass is powerful, but kinda dull...

2:03 breakdown...ok i guess, but no energy.

keep at it, work on the mix and the sound. right now it's muddy and nothing is really defined.

Cheers guys for the replies, I'll give it a go at changing it a bit.