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Advice on my track please
Im finally getting the hang of this. I started about 2 months ago and made a melody today im pretty happy with. Ths only problem is that im having a very hard time transition from the intro to the verse, it just sort of goes right into it. Any advice or criticism is very welcome. Its not a finished song just a taste of the intro and part of the verse.
Listen to it here:
http://www.myspace.com/mycosismusic
or
http://www.ctel.net/~mcdfam/entity.mp3
Thank you! 
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