If you get a chance, take a listen and let me know what you think..... All feedback is greatly appreciated....

David Adams - Rise to the Cause -- 320Kbps


Thanks in advance,
Adam

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Listening.

I dont like the kick and clap very much.

But the melody and break is very mellow, and with nice shimmering synths.. Do i hear a V-Station melody line there with the high pitched synth ?

Overall, sounds like a personal piece.. does`nt sound quite complete as of yet.. but nice work.

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Originally posted by Subtle Listening. I dont like the kick and clap very much. But the melody and break is very mellow, and with nice shimmering synths.. Do i hear a V-Station melody line there with the high pitched synth ? Overall, sounds like a personal piece.. does`nt sound quite complete as of yet.. but nice work.

Actually, the high-pitched synth is an Atmosphere patch with a CamelSpace effect on it

This is a personal piece if I understand you correctly. I do music strictly as a hobby. I'm not going to kid myself and think I can sale my stuff. I'm nowhere good enough, but I do plan to keep on learning. Maybe one day, I'll be good enough. Who knows.... I just love doing it.

Thanks for the listen!

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Ah. yeah dont take me wrong, I just felt the track had alot of emotion to it, and it didnt try to sound like anything else.. thats why i said personal

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Originally posted by Subtle Ah. yeah dont take me wrong, I just felt the track had alot of emotion to it, and it didnt try to sound like anything else.. thats why i said personal

No no, I didn't take you wrong. I appreciate the feedback. Yeah, it was a bit personal because it sat there without an ending for about 4-5 months. LOL!!! I haven't touched it in so long. I just decided to go ahead and finish it. I know the ending is rushed, but I just want to move to another project

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I really enjoy this track, it has a certain warmth that just wraps itself around you, and overall I like the structure. Maybe some proper mastering could help? Certain levels seem a little too punchy and pronounced.

FUUUUUCK! These melodies rape! They sound very beautiful and I'm staggered to hear so many good ones in one song.

I think you should take out the panning voice sample. A vocal sample may enhance the track, but the harshness of the one you have plus the panning makes it kind of annoying. I think it could work in a harder club mix.

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Originally posted by Beatflux FUUUUUCK! These melodies rape!

I must be getting old I believe this was a compliment

Thanks!!!

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