a new tune Gwrmarines and i made.. a housy type of tune with an asian feel to it! we woul really like to have some feedback on this! ofcourse its returned! the tune is in 224Kbps, enjoy!

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I'd love to know where you were headed with this tune. It's everything but house, techno drums, proggy back-synths, trancy breakdown, it sounds a bit "lost" to me. Good flow through the track, but i personally don't like tracks in which their after-breakdown part has no elements of the breakdown... Like you'd put something in the middle that has no connection to the other parts of the track. But this is a bit personal, so don't take it as a bad thing.

Overall, the energy flow is good, yet this track is seeking itself to be something. Technically good, it just isn't my cup of tea.

I think it sounds really nice, nice drums and rhythm! But it´s very short... The outro is great!


Takere!

Akia

Hey mate,
Listening

Nice percussion in the beginning.
The sub bass is warm, but I dont like the bass sound in general, might just be my taste.. hum.
You did a really good job with the plucked arpeggio in the background. It is a good sound I really like and it adds depth.
Long breakdown. Doesnt do too much for me, could use some more clear hi frequency action.
Now as the beat comes in again, I have to say again that I think the bass really needs a fix, I am not really an expert in the style you are going for, but it seems somehow wrong to me.
Anyway, I am coming to a positive conclusion here not only because the track has atmosphere and stuff, but also because you did a good job on mixing the elements so far. There could still be a bit more going on in the clarity range but so far I like your attempt to put together a clean mix, it pays off. Good job!

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