Title: TakeOff
BPM: 136
Style: Uplifting Trance

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Would love any feedback,

Thanks!

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Last edited by verdonsky on Mar-31-2007 at 22:09

nice track would make the piano wetter though seems very central and dry.

maybe a bit commercial sounding but a nice listen all the same.

keep it up!

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Yeah, i was even going to add a girl vocalist to the piano parts. Yeah Definitly needs some change with pianos, thanks a lot man

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Wow haven't heard the fat saw in a while. Good to revive it. I agree that the piano should be wetter. Use some pads or strings to give it a fuller sound. Good start.

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Thanks man, I hope to hear some of your new stuff soon. I love the stacked saw. Check out Dave 202 pres. Impaxx - Feel, its got a nice stacked saw.

My cpu started getting slow so I'm going to start bouncing, but thats basically all it could handle in real-time, otherwise I would have for sure added a pad.

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Dude,

A nice track and nice Saw.

But the one thing I have to say is that I totally hate that Piano part. It does nothing for the track and just sounds plain rude in my opinion.

I think your kick has had the low end taken out of it a wee bit too much. You may want to apply some ducking Side Chain to the bass just to let a more sonically rich kick punch through, if you see what I mean.

Over all I like the main riff and think you have a good base for a track here but I think that you will be doing yourself an injustice if you pursue the vocalist and piano route.

Leave the track for a bit and then sit down and see what you can do. I'm sure it will be worth it.

Good work though so keep it up.

Cheers
Nem

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Thanks a lot man, inspiring. Yeah, I've definitely considered opting out the piano, makes it sound sooo cheesy.

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