First off, I've only put a few hours into this song, and I plan on putting many more and figuring out where I need to go with it and such.

Just want some peeps to give it a listen and let me know what ya'll think and if I'm heading in the right direction or not.

Any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.

Enjoy the sample.

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Last edited by eXo on Jun-12-2007 at 00:44

Anyone willing to give me some ideas, or tell me what they think, I'll do the same for any one of your tracks.

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might want to add more percussion and FX to give it more of an atmosphere.
that bass you got goin is pretty cool.
change the patterns up a little or add more elements to the track. I know you've only put a few hours into it but if done right, this track can come out pretty damn good.

by the way, might you know what Rohrbach means?

No idea really, I know the direct translation, do you know?

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i think it's something about villagers and a river.
or wayyyyyyyyy back then, a rohrbacher was basically someone who lived in a village near a river....i think.
My bro and i tried to do some research about it but we couldn't seem to find something that we thought was accurate.

Do we share the same last name?

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Rohrbacher


how's the track coming along?

Just added this weird windpipe type sound, and a breakbeat type dealio in the beginning, I think it's starting to come along nicely, I need to come up with a nice long melody or something, heh.

Deliver V2

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it is coming along nicely. just keep at it.
also, the thing panned to the right is a nice add in but it can be quite distracting for some since it's always on the right side.
good work so far!

Deliver V3

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