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I think that the piano needs more than delay, but also a lot of reverb to enrich those tones. Your song is also heavily mono. I'd widen the stereo so it sounds fuller. You need to change the pitch of the bongo like percussion so it fits the melody better. Other than that, the melody is pretty tight. You could make it into something big if you threw in a little arpeggio pattern.
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