Not bad...did you record those vocals? Though they are so spaced out its a bit hard to focus on them...Though the track is a bit cheese...I'm not sure why...Sorry I cant put my figure on it...Though i did bump this from the bottom...maybe somebody else will see it and give their comments.

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Sorry, but this old C'hantal accapella from 1991 has to be one of the most worn out samples ever used in electronic dance music. Just drop it!

I like the intro very mutch but when the rest comes in, 0:47, it sounds like another tune to me, to different. Maybe that will be better when the track is finished... The vocals are good but I agree with Frost-RAVEN, think they are a bit to spaced out. But it has potential, keep it up!


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love the start. Really lush, nice pianos.

Wasn't expecting how it then kicks in. not bad but different to the start. Maybe work a little more on the transition there.

Percussion sounds a little basic to me, maybe add a few more elements to beef it up a bit. I'd aim for a techy groove with the percussion to give the track a bit more rhythm.

overall, seems promising. would like to see how it will go into the next breakdown.

Keep at it..

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I think you need to centralize/mono-ize your lower end a bit, everything is so spread out it doesn't mix/blend well with the rest of the frequencies used in your mix, lacks the drive and oomph

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