Hey [nxx]! What a nice tune! You really groving for each track . You get the atmosphere without losing any energy. Enjoyeble!


Takere!

Akia

Hi there! Long time no type, hehe

First thing i noticed was a bit messed up low end. Very strong bassline and a weak kick, not punchy enough... Probably the kick itself is strong, but you either mixed it badly / didn't eq the bass right. It gets lost, and the track needs a bit more bang out of the kick
Perhaps a compressor on the percussions wouldn't be a bad idea, to give the perc's some flow and liveliness, they sound a bit too static.

It'd be a great track for tripping, hehe, this baby is very emotional and one can feel your love for music through every bar, you've caught the spirit of trance with this tune, definitely
Thumbs up m8

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8) hi akia, hows it going with you. glad you like it.

8) hi tarpex, thanks for listening and some tips

Last edited by [nxx] on Aug-23-2007 at 17:22

Witalsky

Many thx for the comment

I listened your tune...

very good mastering....i want do it similar...but i can't

Nice bassline, and first synths...nice breakdown...but the head melo....hmmm.... i need to feel it, but i can't

Greetings from Poland
Karol

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I like the percussion: pretty clean, well chosen.

The first melody starts pretty strong, builds very nicely... and i like where it goes, i like where it disjuncts. The overall build isnt very strong though, there is a instrument being held in the backround which could be used to make the first overall build stronger.

I like the break, although it wasn't enormously satisfying, i believe it may need more movement in the background... distract my attention from the melody to enhance the break.

That synth in that second build is very nice... the melody is clean too. I like where it goes, everything seems to fit pretty nice IMO, good job.

...ends very cleanly.

Check out my tune! i defiantly need the criticism!

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