[Uplifting Trance] Nightshift - Summer Love [320kbps demo]

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Nightshift
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Registered: Oct 2005
Location: Sacramento, California

[Uplifting Trance] Nightshift - Summer Love [320kbps demo]

Hello guys I was just working on this track in FL Studio and wanted a lil feedback...

http://www.myspace.com/joshualemarmusic

let me know how it makes you feel

Last edited by Nightshift on Oct-31-2007 at 19:06

Oct-30-2007 20:45 United States

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chrisspob
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Registered: Dec 2005
Location: bolton

nice melody nothing origanal, but keep at it! how long you been producing?

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Oct-31-2007 00:03 United Kingdom

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Nightshift
...Ninja Business...

Registered: Oct 2005
Location: Sacramento, California

Now updated with a 320kbps preview on myspace!

and all my bio info is on there chrisspob thanks for your reply

anyone else?

Oct-31-2007 19:05 United States

h24
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Registered: Feb 2007
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It sounds good. I think it could be better if you can add other elements in your track.

But you know it's just an extract of your track. Why don't you put the all the track on your myspace page?

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Nov-01-2007 09:57 France

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PDM
Legacy

Registered: Nov 2004
Location: Fresno, CA

I like the mood of this, I'm listening on headphones now, so I can't really give you proper feedback, but I like what I'm hearing music wise.

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Nov-02-2007 11:12 Colombia

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B_man
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Registered: Dec 2006
Location: Red Wing, United States (a deep pit... very deep)

I am liking the mood of this myself. It is uplifting and adventerous at the same time. Feeling wise, the melody and overall timbre of the track make me feel like looking through the eyes of victory after a storm of hopelessness.

The string part after the arping saw synth died down was smart. It reinforced the message in a soundtrack-like conclussion.

That being said, I will share what I think could be improved upon. For starters, I think the arrangement of the tune could be planned according to making your melody a chorus of a sort, and adding a more planned build-up, release, refrain, and verse (so to speak). It doesn't have to be a very complicated structure, either. Not only would this break up the feeling of repetitiveness that comes 2/3rds into your track, but it would heighten your production values because of different elements being managed in the mix causing you to think more critically about each individual element. I do not usually mix supersaw trance, but I think the bassline could have a little more "oomph" in the lower frequencies only.

I'm sure others will have better opinions of mine if they post. Good job at an epic feel.

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Nov-02-2007 15:12 United States

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Registered: Jul 2005
Location: Ferrara, Italy

start is awesome, and the melody is very nice, good job

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