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Can U Feel The Beat: not a fan of the reverse effect you threw in there. And after that, it starts sounding a bit random. Like you're just chopping the samples up without a clear intent as to why.
It's not Who U R: sounds very old school Rave style, and while it's not necessarily a bad thing, that sound is pretty much dead now. Other than that, it's pretty good.
Soul Sonic Force: sounds a bit too much like a mash-up of samples. And this is the song that I was referring to when I made the "freestyle" comment, lol.
Who Wants War: in general, it made my head hurt.
OK, I think I've listened to enough: Your tunes sound like they lack direction, arrangement. Like a painting, a song needs to be planned out - you need to establish a groove, build to something, break it down, etc. Listen to how professional producers cue the listener that something is going to happen.
I'm nto trying to rip you up man - I rather liked Can U Feel The Beat. But you have a long way to go before it's dance-floor-friendly.
Disclaimer: I may not know wtf I'm talking about. What I said is just my unprofessional opinion about what feelings each tune left on me.
Edit: If you don't really understand what I mean, check this out to see how much planning and fine-tuning a producer puts into just one track.
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Last edited by Cosmic Fur on Jan-18-2008 at 07:02
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