Great beginning.
Kick and bass combo sounds good!
Nice stuttering synths, 0:50 pretty nice harmony, the synth feels a little loud though.
1:30 trippy, I like. The percussion works really well with the groove and sounds great.
3:00 I love how you keep things evolving. The synths never sound the same. Also pretty nice synthwork. I think there are some harsh upper frequencies though.
5:00 Kickass melody, getting more and more depth.
6:00 has an interesting lead. Maybe the mix gets a little chaotic at times but its not really something big.

Overall a very good track, the upper frequencies of the synths feel a little sharp sometimes, i feel you could turn some down just a little bit. Otherwise great work, thanks for sharing!

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Nice thick beat. I agree with cybernetika about the harsh synths.

Oh, the trippy synths at 1:34 are mind-blowing. Great stuff.

I like the drippy sounds at 3:35 or so.

Build up around 5:45 sort of fell flat, somewhere along the line.

Incredible stuff overall. You've got a very polished sound here.

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thanks for the replies...

the synth sound at 1:30 is an albino run through a camelspace...

I think the upper frequencies came out in my homejob mastering...
I gave it a bit of a slope in the mid highs which I shouldn't have done...

thanks for the input...

smiles.
aya.

Thanks for the input...
made the changes.

fixed the upper frequencies (I think)
I hope, otherwise I'd better get my ears checked out.

ran the leads through a filter and cut off the upper frequencies and turned some of them down...
thanks for the fresh ears!!!!!!!!!

Gave it a huge buildup at 5:00!!!!!!
machine gun kick drum and crash... ha ha.
also thickened up the synth after the buildup.
got kinda lazy on that one with the last render.

there isn't supposed to be a buildup at 5:32 as that's the start of the intro as things are thinning out to end the song...
unless I'm mistaken? Do you think I should build into that?
thought the build should be at 5:00.

anyways...
really super appreciate the feedback...
and the honesty...

made the changes you recomended...
thanks again.

gonna play it out tonight at Organix...

smiles.
chris.