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"...one of the strongest motives that lead men to art and science is escape from everyday life with its painful crudity and hopeless dreariness, from the fetters of one's own ever-shifting desires. A finely tempered nature longs to escape from the personal life into the world of objective perception and thought." - Albert Einstein

Well this certainly is hi-nrg haha... very high tempo, rapidfire synth work. That plonky oldskool kick causes it to border on happy hardcore though, I'd change to something a bit sharper and modern if you're wanting to stick to a trance sound. Those explosion FX in the breakdown are a little cliched though, especially for this genre - it'd be cool if you put something a little more original in there? Bassline is too understated too, I say make it growl underneath your other layers! Your melodies are good though, this is definitely stuff I woulda gone nuts too back when I was into this sort of energy trance ... It's not my thing anymore, but plenty of people still dig it, make some tweaks and this has potential in the realm of hardhouse!

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Thanks for the constructive critics! I surely will change the kickdrum and make the bass more harder. I also want to add female robot-like vocal and change the pad on human choir in psychodelic arpeggio part.

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"...one of the strongest motives that lead men to art and science is escape from everyday life with its painful crudity and hopeless dreariness, from the fetters of one's own ever-shifting desires. A finely tempered nature longs to escape from the personal life into the world of objective perception and thought." - Albert Einstein