any advice??i would really like some feedback as ive no one nearby to criticise and steer me in certain direction..cheers

Soundin ok mate. I like the synth that comes in at the drop. Its a good idea keep working on it. It needs a lot more work basically. As rough as it is thers nowt glaringly bad about it.

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i don't know if it's my speakers, but from what I can hear, the volume levels could do some adjusting just a tiny bit.

but anyway, I like it. Especially the part after the break

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the break is really nice could do with a little tweak before it breaks back down
but the soft synth in the back sounds nice and shound become a little harder as the song progresses but that just what i think ... keep workin on it'

Loving the kick, the glitchy minimal type percussion I think could be turned down slightly or something, overall I think its good. Needs more of a build though coming out of the break.

What are you using to produce?

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im using cubase...which minimal perc should be turned down??is it the synth that acts as second bassline u mean???

i also noticed the reverb lead after the break need to be turned up too..