Hello people!

Here's a new Fabrik Europa song. I've spent the last few months focusing on composition (plus some work on production techniques). This is the first song to come out of that process, there are many more to come. I have a bucketload of material to work through now.


Fabrik Europa - Dawn Flight


I'm planning to get this signed soon, so the download link probably won't last very long. I am keen to get some feedback - some things may have slipped past me. The first ten people to provide useful feedback in this post who want me to critique a song of theirs, I'll provide a thorough critique of their song.

Thanks heaps for listening, I hope you enjoy this one!

Fabian

i was hagnin on the edge till the melody came in
this is clean!

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hi there , listening
interesting opening
good intro
mmmmm at 1.55 it is a bit strange , feels like its gone off key
i would of opted for a breakdown their personally
And i keep picking up the off key transitions from there on in
production wise , cant pick anything up

overall the tune has a really feelgood factor on it
wish you good luck with it

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Good drums, the melodies are really happy. Happy is fun cause it's really uplifting and ravers love this shit.

You do a pretty sharp key change which is a bit jarring, though nothing to wrong with it.

I don't have a too lot to say, mix is fine by me and so is the production.

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like everyone say, melows happy, ..........very happy! =0/
bassline and percs (base of the track) its pretty good
but yeah, to happy for me
but hey, if you like that style, go for it =)

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So Serene

Like said before, melody "kinda" happy, doesnt fit the buildup at all imo. Most other ingredients like bass, percs etc. sound good, its just the melody being way too dominant in a negative way imo.

Not bad.

Way too happy and epic for my tastes, and kind of generic.

Your production skills are certainly good though.

The key change is a bit jarring, but after a bit I find it refreshing.
I love the main melody and I wish the bright synth was more epic, instead of happy. Introducing the kick from a wee little thing to a full on kick makes mixing this song a little tougher than normal to mix. I love the melody; it's longer and more interesting than other tracks.

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