This sounds just great. The mainbassline rocks.
I think the track needs a bit more uplifting melody before in the "release".

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I'm glad you like it
I'm not sure I understand what you mean by 'before in the "release"'. Could you be more specific?

Thank you again!

Sorry I was in a hurry when I listened to your track and wrote my comment. I wrote some text and erased it later, but by accident didn't erase the word "before" But what I meant that during the breakdown around 2:40 you could introduce some elements of another melody and maybe explode the song with that melody after the release around 3:10.

Of course this is only my vision of how it could go. Dunno if it would work but hey the song sounds great already!

i would side the bass to the kick if i were you there are some clashes, also i dont feel the kick in the sub bass frequencies... all sounds nicely put but that kick is messing my experience... i feel like there is a mess at 3:10 everything wants to be upfront and its kinda messy there, try focusing on one thing or even two...

a nice put track, i liked the bass the most, more originality could be put in the melody and sounds of leads etc.

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Thank you for pointing that out.
I didn't spend too much time on the kick and I guess it shows
I will try to EQ everything a little better.
As for the mess at 3:10 I will have to look into that but that's a good point.
Thanks again for taking time to check out this track.
BTW, I really enjoyed 'Abrupt Interrupt'. I think that's what you meant by a good kick

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Originally posted by moodshaper Thank you for pointing that out. I didn't spend too much time on the kick and I guess it shows I will try to EQ everything a little better. As for the mess at 3:10 I will have to look into that but that's a good point. Thanks again for taking time to check out this track. BTW, I really enjoyed 'Abrupt Interrupt'. I think that's what you meant by a good kick

it was the one that fit at that moment, i could have just as easily put a different kick it depends on the state of mind but i think its important to make it best fitted to your track...

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I have one more question. What style would you say this track falls into? I mean as far as beatport categories go??

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Originally posted by moodshaper I have one more question. What style would you say this track falls into? I mean as far as beatport categories go??

trance i guess?

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Originally posted by moodshaper I have one more question. What style would you say this track falls into? I mean as far as beatport categories go??

nu-nrg

i would say lower the bass a bit at the start (up to 1.50min) its big but stands out a bit too much. the tracks ok but needs a change by the 4 minute mark.