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Originally posted by QuantumPlay here is another beautiful track that some of you might like. thought i would post it here as it is quite finished now. i really like the raw bassline i used in this.. melody is quite catchy too Download Here Enjoy

im downloading now will give feedback soon as allways.

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Originally posted by airwalker1 im downloading now will give feedback soon as allways.

awesome. let me hear some comments. :P

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liked what you did with the bassline has a nice movement to it.
and it seems you are staying on the tec side of things
the only thing i felt needing more work was the riff.
not because it wasn't good,but you opted for a very striped down and simple track/format. and it felt like it was a bit boring/empty.
if you know what i meen,a bit more drive would help it along more.
but as allways i try and give a construtive and clear feedback as allways matey.

I really like the kick =)
First 3 mins are sick. The beginning of the break is a little bit to empty in my opinion.
I like the rest of the break, but as your friend says you may need to spice it up a bit after it.

But its really good, you should finish it

Cheers

thanks for the feedback guys! i will take these constructive comments under work and see if i get back on this track later.

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Cool bass, could do with some more melodies else where to give it more varition as others said. Good stuff though mate, I like your other tracks. Oh the percs sound great in this one also.

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Originally posted by music2dance2 Cool bass, could do with some more melodies else where to give it more varition as others said. Good stuff though mate, I like your other tracks. Oh the percs sound great in this one also.

yup needs more of something melodiy wise, but will have to see that later since i'm quite busy with other things. thanks alot for the comment!

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