its ok but if you dont mind a bit of constructive criticism:

sounds a bit minimal at the moment, would say it needs much more effects, fills and other sounds. sounds are a bit on the thin/softsynth sounding side.

bass drum is too loud/prominant.

melody lasts too long, need to change to some other melody at least half way through.
keep it up though

always up for a bit of constructive criticism,
will probably do a bit more on it during the week, cheers for the input

agree with the previous poster , maybe have a quiet shaker perc panned hard right and the same sample panned 3/4 left to give abit of width at the beggining.
Although percs are my weak spot too , i know you havent enough of them in there.

The synths dont sound too stereo seperated to give the track the wide trance sound that it needs.

Overall would work on the width of the track , and looking at more percs and FX.

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cheers adi you'd be right about the width there is none, everything is down the center,will keep that in mind, percs are my weakpoint alright, will hav to spent some time get to grips with them
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