no feedback anyone can offer me?

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Happy Hardcore with a heavy, heavy dose of both fast and slow attack super-saws and a leit-motif that, in its constancy, becomes a little tired.

I think I found myself waiting for something more to happen with it. The changes you made, while excellent (very cool variations), were either too infrequent or not lasting enough.

Understand that I'm not a happy-hardcore (or hard-house or any variation of that which is considered, 'hard') fan or producer, by any stretch of the imagination. The critique above probably has more to do with what I think a song should do and less about the quality of this production. Knowing a happy-hardcore DJ, however, I could hear the tune being worked into one of his sets.

Aside from some clipping artifact (and I'm not sure if that was intentional or not) during the first break where the sound seems to drop out sporadically, and not for very long - a bit like distortion without the distortion - the mix is generally pretty good. I heard the basses, drums, leads, and arpeggio, very clearly.

I'm not too familiar with the Star Fox franchise but I recognized the tune. I like the ideas you formed with it. Musically, the phrasing was good and I did detect subtle changes along the general motif that made listening interesting.

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Originally posted by EddieZilker Happy Hardcore with a heavy, heavy dose of both fast and slow attack super-saws and a leit-motif that, in its constancy, becomes a little tired. I think I found myself waiting for something more to happen with it. The changes you made, while excellent (very cool variations), were either too infrequent or not lasting enough. Understand that I'm not a happy-hardcore (or hard-house or any variation of that which is considered, 'hard') fan or producer, by any stretch of the imagination. The critique above probably has more to do with what I think a song should do and less about the quality of this production. Knowing a happy-hardcore DJ, however, I could hear the tune being worked into one of his sets. Aside from some clipping artifact (and I'm not sure if that was intentional or not) during the first break where the sound seems to drop out sporadically, and not for very long - a bit like distortion without the distortion - the mix is generally pretty good. I heard the basses, drums, leads, and arpeggio, very clearly. I'm not too familiar with the Star Fox franchise but I recognized the tune. I like the ideas you formed with it. Musically, the phrasing was good and I did detect subtle changes along the general motif that made listening interesting.

awesome thanks man, i have a better idea of how this tune could end up.
thanks for the advice and critique, much appreciated.

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