okay you have GOT to stop spamming this...lol. but not bad choonz.

This is not spamming my good friend, its just selp promotion...

If you think what I do is spamming... you've never seen spamming in your life and I hope it will be kept that way coz spamming sucks hard


Anyway, thanks!

I'm gonna be honest with you, because that is the way you'll learn most right?

The song I'll be critisizing is "the night fall"
I'll start with the good things: The melody sounds alright: it's not like the typical trance-melody, so that's ok. It does sound familiar, but it ain't all worn out. Furthermore: after about 2:28 minutes everything seems to be in order and harmonious (wrong spelling I guess?). From then on the track sounds really good.

A lame thing about the song is the bassdrum that kicks in at about 53 seconds and the bassline that's behind it. It sounds a bit cheap. The melody starts a bit sudden and doesn't sound to good with the string you used until the 2:28 minute border I mentioned before. A minor remark goes out to the bassdrum itself. It sounds a bit like a eurodance drum instead. It might be better to try something harder.

You might really be getting somewhere.
ReSPeCT.

Thanks for your review, I really noticed that there's a bit of a tune off between the mainstream and the starting melody, i've tryed to fix it in like 10000 ways but I failed, if you have any suggestions i'll be glad to try them.


DJ KicK