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Since noone else commented I'll give you my "I have no idea about music production"-opinion about it. 
In general, I believe the track is a bit too repetitive, it could use either a different melody interacting with your main one, or a smoother buildup.
I feel like the difference in synthsound around the first minute is too small compared to let's say 4.30. Especially cause you seem to increase and decrease (don't know the production terms  ) your synth's "sharpness" in the 4th minute instead of letting it go full out.
In the beginning you have some kicks which are standing completely seperate but you don't really use that pattern later on, so I get the feeling they don't add anything. They might be used again when you introduce your sharper synth during minute 2. At around 2.32 you introduce a li'l sound in the background indicating the upcoming kickdrum, but you abandon it at 2.44. You could use that background sound and expand it to make the transition to the 3.05 part more smooth since now that seems a li'l sudden.
Hope this is somehow usefull to you
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