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There are some nice strong ideas in this track.
There's a couple of things i'd look at :-
The gated chords could use a little more reverb to sit them in the mix a bit better and give them a bit more width.
The bassline is a bit too in your face at times. I'd maybe high pass the bassline you have to pull out the bottom end and then put in another bassline to put back the low end but have it playing another melodic and rhythmic line and keep it subtle.
The main lead that comes in about half way through gets lost a little bit and could use another complementary lead or arp to come in and play with it a bit later on in the track.
nice work though 
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