I am new in trance production. This is my 3 latest songs and I would like to hear what do you think about them. Eny sugestion is welcome, bed or good.

http://www.myspace.com/wellimir

Last edited by wellimir on Apr-27-2010 at 08:48

Hello
I think when you put a little animation by the side of the Post people wont respond, cause this forum is full of forum fascists.. you know the types.

anyway. :-)

Planet Heaven

Interesting track... generally good. Got an interesting style, not your usual trance stormer.

For me the best part is the lead melody, and in the breakdown.. really nice. But these days tracne is so layered, just feel it needs more happening like some cool pads that sort of thing. The kick I feel needs to be more prominent in the track... Also feel the structure is a bit too random. People like a certain way tracks build and fall, and think you should stick to genre.

Just my opinion :-)

thanks mark for listen and your time)i have remove a side icon also,.yeah its a little bit wrong from me

i tried to make tracks that feels more sound on old style,its easy for me to make,i hope you enjoy a little,.,i am still learning and i hope i will make some good tracks

all the best and thanks for feedback)))

new track on my myspace page Space In Room(original mix) i hope you will like it) any suggestion is welcome.,,.,bad or good.,

http://www.myspace.com/wellimir

new tracks on soundcloud .,.if you got time check them out

any positive or negative feedback is welcome)

Wellimir - There Be Love by Wellimir


Wellimir-Space in Room by Wellimir



Wellimir - Reflect by Wellimir

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Originally posted by mark_gg_daniels Hello ..... cause this forum is full of forum fascists.. you know the types.

Yeah, not very friendly or welcoming but the idea is that you contribute to this forum the same way you would like to take benefits out of it.

All of us have different full time job and we do what we can to help each other and contribute as much as we can to this forum, so work with us and we will share the LOVE with you too.

PS - I will run your track and come back with my comment.

Cheers.

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Last edited by TranceLover007 on May-28-2010 at 18:12

Left some comments on SC - overall like your vision/ideas for the music - nice work so far man.

Cheers

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thanks man for really nice feedbacks)much apreciatte for your time to listen my tracks))

good stuff welli (mind if i call u that hah)

i've noticed that you do need to work on your eqing and compression a bit though, as well as your kick in all the songs. not saying it's bad, but it could be much better then it is now. your ideas and concepts (glitchy synths woohoo) are outstanding, but its the finalizing standpoint that you need to work on.

btw in your last song, reflect, the background perc loop sounds very familiar. i know that you download it from some website and its like 135 bpm or something like that

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I like the stuttered lead in Reflect.

your sound separation is working and I think your choice of sounds is good in the first place.

Are you mixing on headphones or hifi speakers? Sounds like you might be. The bottom end is a bit undefined in your mixes, but not tragically bad.

If there was one area i'd say needs work it's your song structure. Try and think more in terms of intro, verse, chorus, break etc. Not that a track has to follow a rigid structure, but at the moment your's seem to wander and fail to keep the listeners interest.

Not bad at all for somebody who's new to this though

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