Very, very repetitive, but I really like some of your sounds! The new lead at 3.39 is nice, but perhaps too prominent. I would only like to hear more variation throughout.
Good job, man.
Jul-02-2010 09:51
owien
maverick
Registered: Jan 2009
Location: the south
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Originally posted by Owsey2008
Very, very repetitive, but I really like some of your sounds! The new lead at 3.39 is nice, but perhaps too prominent. I would only like to hear more variation throughout.
Good job, man.
yeah its no epic the idea off it was to get you listing to the sounds in the track and leave something to the Imagination thanks for taking a listen
Registered: Jan 2002
Location: Perth, Western Australia
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Originally posted by owien
yeah its no epic the idea off it was to get you listing to the sounds in the track and leave something to the Imagination thanks for taking a listen
That's interesting what you say about leaving something to the listener's imagination, I'm glad I read that before hitting play because otherwise I may have found this a bit dull. The lead and the ambient background textures drew me in the most, I found myself trying to figure out what story they were telling and how they related to the strange track title and then letting the imagery flow from that, so I guess in that sense it is quite hypnotic. The slow bpm helps with that too. Interesting one, thanks for sharing
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Jul-04-2010 06:27
owien
maverick
Registered: Jan 2009
Location: the south
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Originally posted by novastorm
That's interesting what you say about leaving something to the listener's imagination, I'm glad I read that before hitting play because otherwise I may have found this a bit dull. The lead and the ambient background textures drew me in the most, I found myself trying to figure out what story they were telling and how they related to the strange track title and then letting the imagery flow from that, so I guess in that sense it is quite hypnotic. The slow bpm helps with that too. Interesting one, thanks for sharing
no worries the track took me a few days to make so not very long i wanted to get somthing across without the normal filling it with lots of shit.
sounds like a half-assed track to me, that being said i think its a good base.
Jul-04-2010 23:12
owien
maverick
Registered: Jan 2009
Location: the south
quote:
Originally posted by msz
i like the elements in the track but...
sounds like a half-assed track to me, that being said i think its a good base.
haha you got me im currently using new software and im also in a place where i cant really decide what tunes to make these days lol anyway thanks for the listen
sorry dont mean to sound mean if do, keep up the producin.
Jul-04-2010 23:43
owien
maverick
Registered: Jan 2009
Location: the south
quote:
Originally posted by msz
sorry dont mean to sound mean if do, keep up the producin.
nope not mean its not my best work im just stepping into a new area and the funny thing is this track was made in a few days and ive had more interest then my other bigger tunes that took weeks to make lol
Registered: Jun 2008
Location: Lelystad, Netherlands
I like it!
few tips:
- more variation: the percussion layers (skipping forward in SC gives the same percussion during hte whole track
- tweak or layer you ambiance sounds / pad more, reosnate, play with volume/verb etc. create a bit more texture/depth
- use that bass sound more often, but less long, now the track really has 2 chapters, i think this works better if there are like 4 shorter chapters.
furthermore well done!
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