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Dunno why nobody comment it, but its quite good stuff.
Its a bit empty, even for that deadmau5 style, you need to make something happen... Also you can change that bass, for example change a note? Just to get that driving feel...
Other than that, its pretty clean, mixdown is decent also, everything is well balanced.

Hope that helped, cheers...

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Bass does need some major development. Its got no changes at all in the track once it comes in and what not.

Everything is fairly balanced in the mix which is good. I am not sure whether the track will work better once the bass line gets some more development, but it doesn't really have a hook.

As mentioned its very deadmau5 in its styling, or rather, Eastern Canadian as both Adam K & Soha use a similar sound. That's not bad per say, but they all have pretty big hooks in most of their tracks, so they can get away with stripping out/down a lot of the other sounds.

You could also develop another lead/pad that is more harmonic (i.e. less stabby)to accent the lead you have. The track right now is rather formulaic, and it might behoove you to add in a bit more spontaneity to it for memorable feelings.

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