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like i've said before, good synth.
i would add some breaks to break things up. (no pun intended)
and i would also change some of the volume adjustments, either fade the volume adjustments more or just not make them.
Other than that it kicks ass, and is much better than the original. great synthies.
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edit: after listening to it another time, I think the main thing you should do is make the part at 2:48 and 3:16 much longer. The synths are so goddamn strong and uplifing, that with that synth and maybe a build with beats, the song would be massive.
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The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.
Last edited by davinox on Aug-07-2002 at 05:11
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