Some nice ideas, but I think the mixdown could be better and the synths could use a little more development.

Nice Track man, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very nice melody during and after the breakdown. It could use a few adjustments but overall it was a very nice track! I played it twice already and might play it a third time. Check mine out at http://soundcloud.com/lockdowndj/generate-pulsar

nice track man, i like the intro, kick, bass and effects flow realy well together, the synths sound alot like outback which is a plus too, main melody doesnt realy float my boat but i like the overall sound, well done

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Hey mate,

Listening as I review:

0:45 - Not convinced this kick has the weight it needs.
0.55 - Old school snare fill is a bit dry for my tastes, but I like the de-pitch at the end
1.03 - Nice snare
1.25 - Like the digi bass riff
2.20 - This saw-type lead sounds haunted!
3.00 - Try adding some nice stereo FX for atmosphere here?
4.00 - The progression between here and 5.00 seemed like it could happen a bit quicker. Maybe an extra pad that comes in at 4.00 would help.
5.00-6.00 - Bit fuller now, nice.
6.18 - Nice outro lead-in


Overall, not in line with my personal tastes (I *tend* to prefer brighter, fuller tracks) but fairly well produced. Keep it up.

Thanks,
Alex

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Some nice ideas, but I think the mixdown could be better and the synths could use a little more development.

I totally agree with you regarding mixdown and synth development. I guess this is what you get for working in the dark and only stacking subtractors. Good thing you didn't hear it before it was mastered

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Originally posted by Lockdown Nice Track man, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Very nice melody during and after the breakdown. It could use a few adjustments but overall it was a very nice track! I played it twice already and might play it a third time. Check mine out at http://soundcloud.com/lockdowndj/generate-pulsar

I think we share the same taste... added a comment on your cloud.

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Originally posted by 5oundbite nice track man, i like the intro, kick, bass and effects flow realy well together, the synths sound alot like outback which is a plus too, main melody doesnt realy float my boat but i like the overall sound, well done

Not really sure what you mean by "outback", but thanks.

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Originally posted by AlexChilcott Hey mate, Listening as I review: 0:45 - Not convinced this kick has the weight it needs. 0.55 - Old school snare fill is a bit dry for my tastes, but I like the de-pitch at the end 1.03 - Nice snare 1.25 - Like the digi bass riff 2.20 - This saw-type lead sounds haunted! 3.00 - Try adding some nice stereo FX for atmosphere here? 4.00 - The progression between here and 5.00 seemed like it could happen a bit quicker. Maybe an extra pad that comes in at 4.00 would help. 5.00-6.00 - Bit fuller now, nice. 6.18 - Nice outro lead-in Overall, not in line with my personal tastes (I *tend* to prefer brighter, fuller tracks) but fairly well produced. Keep it up. Thanks, Alex

Thanks alot for your input. Goes to all of you btw. Feel free to drop me a note if you ever need a "fresh ear" on something.

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Originally posted by candybag Not really sure what you mean by "outback", but thanks.

Are you kidding me?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ydxVqtXVQj0#t=1m14s

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oILO0_Yr8-A#t=1m50s

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Originally posted by 5oundbite Are you kidding me? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ydxVqtXVQj0#t=1m14s http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oILO0_Yr8-A#t=1m50s

I'm not as religious about trance these days, and i rarely cba to look up what's good... but wow, i'm digging their sound

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