New Trance Track (serious reviews only)

http://soundcloud.com/dj-zidumare/zidumare-checkpoint

Thank you

-Zid-

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Originally posted by Joss Weatherby I almost wish zidumare was my alt.

This doesn't sound very trancy.

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Originally posted by euphoria This doesn't sound very trancy.

im sorry i missed all the over extended break downs, stupid piano and vocals in the middle and the weak melody drop near the end.

SORRY I MISSED ALL THAT...

go back to the roots of trance moron, cause what you call trance today is just

pop-dance music.

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Originally posted by Joss Weatherby I almost wish zidumare was my alt.

calm down.

Bad Things:

-The overall mixdown sounds flat, like being behind a filter.
-Don't like the bass that much
- I don't find the kick very appropiate nor well produced.
- Do you know how much the track would benefit of snares/claps, hats and percussions?
-Too long without a real progression that keeps it interesting.

Good things:

-The sounds used are fresh in 2012 although some of them sound a bit amateur, i suppose this is the kind of trance a producer from 1998 that hasn't received any influence since then would produce.

-It has a good psy feeling the ambience you've created works.

Basically with a good mixdown, some percussions and a new coherent structure this would be something that people would have in their ipod.

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Originally posted by zidumare im sorry i missed all the over extended break downs, stupid piano and vocals in the middle and the weak melody drop near the end. SORRY I MISSED ALL THAT... go back to the roots of trance moron, cause what you call trance today is just pop-dance music.

i'm sorry but this track really isn't something most people would consider trance. I only made it to 2:30 in because the track really didn't have any direction. There's a whole lot more I can say but just take a look at the differences between even minor label releases from the newest of the new people to your track.

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Originally posted by MrPhilleh i'm sorry but this track really isn't something most people would consider trance. I only made it to 2:30 in because the track really didn't have any direction. There's a whole lot more I can say but just take a look at the differences between even minor label releases from the newest of the new people to your track.

2:30 is where the song begins...

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Originally posted by Joss Weatherby I almost wish zidumare was my alt.

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Originally posted by Euforix If you want people to give you serious reviews you'd better start asking them seriously and not acting like a kiddo.

yeah but i asked for serious reviews, i didnt ask people to tell me how to make a generic club song...

ps. if people are allowed to "formulate opinions" about my song without any actual hard evidence, im allowed to "formulate opinions" about their opinions, am i not? if we get some maturity in the discussion, i will be more mature as well.

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Originally posted by Joss Weatherby I almost wish zidumare was my alt.

My track is better than yours.

Lunga by mafoogabooga

Yeah the sound quality is crap.
I completely agree with the structure of it. It's not really going anywhere.
In saying that i like what you've done.
Your slight hints of acid add to it.
Sounds like a tone down version of something Combichrist would do.

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THE LAST FLIGHT - PROGRESSIVE HOUSE/TRANCE

Seriously though, I can see your frustration. You don't like that music you don't dig is getting way more popular than music you do dig. It has somehow turned you into a tortured soul. What you've made is the musical equivalent of this:

http://thatguywiththeglasses.com/videolinks/teamt/oancitizen/brows-held-high/33548-trash-humpers

Hope you got enlightened.

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Why is there 2 threads for this???
It was shit the first time round, a new thread dont make it sound anybetter.

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Originally posted by zidumare im sorry i missed all the over extended break downs, stupid piano and vocals in the middle and the weak melody drop near the end. SORRY I MISSED ALL THAT... go back to the roots of trance moron, cause what you call trance today is just pop-dance music.

Sorry, I was trying to be nice. Clearly you aren't so now I will just be honest. Your song sucks!

A genre is a genre, you can't make House and tell people its Rock. It just doesn't work that way.

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