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Last edited by Trancelover03591 on Oct-21-2012 at 00:06

This sound really promising man, at least for now - what you are missing is this massive lead with long tail plying some sweet and catchy melody around 2 min mark - can't wait for more on this lol

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Do you mean the new synth you can hear coming in at the very end of the track that has a lot of reverb along with the crash? Or something different?

You do a great job with a lot of synths in your songs and I have a difficult time adding elements that sound good together, so I appreciate the advice.

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Completely new lead need to be introduce in around 1:30 mark (my opinion)

Check this track and time 2:23 - this is this kind of sound I was talking about.

DriusX - A PROMISE (WIP only for you guys) by DariusX.

Sorry for self promoting lol - this is the best way to visualize what I'm after

Let me know !!!

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I'd change the snare sound and detune the main synth a bit more - other than that - I like it, clean mix and a lovely melody.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Completely new lead need to be introduce in around 1:30 mark (my opinion) Check this track and time 2:23 - this is this kind of sound I was talking about. DriusX - A PROMISE (WIP only for you guys) by DariusX. Sorry for self promoting lol - this is the best way to visualize what I'm after Let me know !!! Darek

Yeah I see what you mean.

How long have you been in music production? That is a awesome track.

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Yeah I see what you mean. How long have you been in music production? That is a awesome track.

EDM for about 3 years - Rock group (when I was young) for about 7 years on solo guitar

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Beautiful Rain - Update by CalebGolston

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Very pretty chord progression. I wish the percussion elaborated more, though.

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Yeah, like he said... the percussion is kind of weak. Listening to it on some floor mount Polk speakers and a Denon amp and it sounds good, but to really make this stand out the drums need to play a bigger role. Sounds nearly like ASOT or TATW.

I think you might need to tame the tail of the kick a bit as it's coming through the mix a little too much.

Also, that main stab is too forward in the mix, just a bit though. I'd look at reducing the amp release as you open the filters up and wetting it up with a bit of delay and/or reverb as well. I think it needs more ducking too.

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Good work so far - I agree on the filter opening - it looses a little energy there.

I have a lead melody and sound in my head for this.
I really love the kick choice.

Sorry I missed this earlier.

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