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Hey Raphie,
Always a pleasure listening to your tracks.
It's a very sound structure, has all the bits in the right place.
I tend to find your kicks have too much knock and not enough booty, but again it's a taste thing. That said I like kicks to hit you like a sack of manure so take it for what it's worth. 
The main riff is actually very catchy and that's a hard thing to do so I take my hat off to you for that.
I think if you changed the sound palette slightly and beefed up the breakdown and drop you would actually have a hit record.
For some reason I find the release on the piano to be a little long, but then I like sharp stabby sounds so again personal preference. Perhaps gate them as they feel as if they are hanging in there just a little too long for me. I think this would help pick up the percieved tempo of the track.
Drop could be so much more, you can tell it's there but I don't think the build up does it justice and would also suggest that perhaps you look at how the energey transfers in this section.
Thanks for sharing though.
Awesome work
Nem
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