Intro is good.. I don't like how that bass arp comes in.. It's like the first sound is modern then you come in with that vintage bass sound.. I would work on your drum work.. it sounds kind of amateurish.. that clap and kick sounds old.. try layering your drums.. I would have a white noise that buildsup to where your piano comes in.. but besides that track is good... But anyway checkout my new progressive house track > http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...2&forumid=74&s= it's pretty sick

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Originally posted by CocaineAudio Intro is good.. I don't like how that bass arp comes in.. It's like the first sound is modern then you come in with that vintage bass sound.. I would work on your drum work.. it sounds kind of amateurish.. that clap and kick sounds old.. try layering your drums.. I would have a white noise that buildsup to where your piano comes in.. but besides that track is good... But anyway checkout my new progressive house track > http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...2&forumid=74&s= it's pretty sick

Thanks for the feedback! Your track is pretty good, it builds up nicely and the vocals fit well. Good job!

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Originally posted by ediket1 Thanks for the feedback! Your track is pretty good, it builds up nicely and the vocals fit well. Good job!

Thanks bro

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Originally posted by ediket1 https://soundcloud.com/ediket/reverie Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Can you please embed your track code in here - may help you get more comments

Cheers mate,

Darek

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