This song is all over the place!

Starts off with pop, goes into chiptune, then dubstep, trance, oh my. They all sound cool individually, but together it seems to lack cohesiveness. Melodies and harmonies are very catchy though, gotta give you that one! And the vocals are very clean.

I do admit posting tracks to TA can be quite intimidating, but some of the criticism I've received has helped me greatly. Good luck with your productions!

Thanks! Do you know anywhere else I could post it? Is there other threads or forums that you know of that are good for this sort of thing?