This track works much better together than the other one yours (Také my umbrella).

I like how it has this sort of "dirty" retro-ish sound. The mixdown of this track is much better and free of minor annoyances.

The composition is nice and I like the soundquality too.

It does sound a little "different" than what most will be used to, but I mean that in an honestly good way.

The breakdown to the piano at about 2:48 seems a little too abrupt again, though. You could have spent a little more time on that.

But then again the buildup after the piano breakdown is really good. Rather abrupt but in a good way.

Please try to work on the connection of the parts, your tracks are really good. I like them both. But they need a little bit of a touch-up, but obviously, youre a talent! So good luck!

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Originally posted by BOOsTER This track works much better together than the other one yours (Také my umbrella). I like how it has this sort of "dirty" retro-ish sound. The mixdown of this track is much better and free of minor annoyances. The composition is nice and I like the soundquality too. It does sound a little "different" than what most will be used to, but I mean that in an honestly good way. The breakdown to the piano at about 2:48 seems a little too abrupt again, though. You could have spent a little more time on that. But then again the buildup after the piano breakdown is really good. Rather abrupt but in a good way. Please try to work on the connection of the parts, your tracks are really good. I like them both. But they need a little bit of a touch-up, but obviously, youre a talent! So good luck!

Thanks for czech-ing out my links. Lol, I couldn't resist. Great feedback, it's all true. But I feel too tired to go back as it is. What is done is done. I may revisit it again later and if I do I shall change it according to your suggestion. Thanks again,

Haha I would not be able to resist it in your place either.

I know this. I never got around to changing tracks I felt I have finished according to no suggestions either. No worries about that. Although, you have the feedback and that might make your next tracks better hope you understand. Looking forward to your next tracks.

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