hhmmm... sounds like a breeding of dark breaks, trance and IDM (without those noisy fx's, hehe)... trippy, calm, dark... good tune to chill-out About the end, I think you shouldn't add that 4/4 beat, because it kinda destroys the vibe (you've got to decide whether if you want people to dance to it or relax listening to it). You could make two different versions, for example. Just my opinion. I'm looking forward to hearing the final version


ps.: I don't want to sound annoying, but could you please change your avatar? It's way too explicit for a trance forum

thanx for the feedback, bro...

i think u r right about the 4/4 beat... i should make 2 different versions, or something... eh... i dont know yet =))

thanx bro...


and, yeah, ill change the avatar, i just wanted to see what would people say about it =) lol ... sorry... sick joke..

please, people.....if u download the track - write some feedback.....im experimenting with breakbeat, and i just wanna know how bad I suck at it =)

You have a lot of good stuff here to work with. The bass lines sound really good, exept a little stagnant from the 2 min mark to about 3:30. It takes kind of long to get involved i think. The bass drum sounds a bit cheesy alone when it comes in at the 1 min mark. Try experimenting with some more complex drum patterns or maybe bring more then just the bass drum in at first. The intro might sound better if you try filtering a solid steady bassline in as well. I agree with Maaz on the 4/4 at the end. It just doesn't seem to work well in this track. Keep playing with it cuz it has a lot of potential
good luck

sounds pretty sweet, cant find much fault with it other than what's already been pointed out

would go really well as part of the soundtrack to a scary pc game

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Originally posted by xDaDXeRx You have a lot of good stuff here to work with. The bass lines sound really good, exept a little stagnant from the 2 min mark to about 3:30. It takes kind of long to get involved i think. The bass drum sounds a bit cheesy alone when it comes in at the 1 min mark. Try experimenting with some more complex drum patterns or maybe bring more then just the bass drum in at first. The intro might sound better if you try filtering a solid steady bassline in as well. I agree with Maaz on the 4/4 at the end. It just doesn't seem to work well in this track. Keep playing with it cuz it has a lot of potential good luck

thanx bro!

the most constructive feeback so far...

I will work on the bassdrum, and ill try to redo the part from 2 mins to 3:30... it sounds kinda boring, yeah... you're right..."The intro might sound better if you try filtering a solid steady bassline in as well." what do u mean by that bro?

Cool track, love the bass. I think it could have worked without the trancy part in the end, those synths doesn't really fit with the rest of the track IMO, and it sounds to me like som notes are off in the bassline in at 7:40.

Keep it up

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Originally posted by -AbsurD- ...."The intro might sound better if you try filtering a solid steady bassline in as well." what do u mean by that bro?

Umm originaly what i was thinking was that you use a low pass filter where you could gradually bring the bass in at the begining but after listening to the intro a bit more I think its pretty good how it is.

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Originally posted by Haak Cool track, love the bass. I think it could have worked without the trancy part in the end, those synths doesn't really fit with the rest of the track IMO, and it sounds to me like som notes are off in the bassline in at 7:40. Keep it up

thanx bro =)

but as I said, its unfinished especially the last part =)))

theres a problem now....

I started workin on the track a long time ago, and i made only the last part, i made the synths, the bassline and other stuff...

and all of my friends liked it, they liked it so much, that when I said ill never gonna finish it, (coz i couldnt, i tried diff things, and i just coulndt make the beginning) they almost killed me... well... ok ...a few nites ago I started makin this, and now i understand that those 2 parts r not going well.... wth shud I do? lol

Two different tracks