new track and new style for me so please comment on it

ZEROSIX - WICKED THING

___________________
Daniel

Last edited by dbl on Mar-12-2003 at 09:40

8 looks on it.. no comments??? *cries*

___________________
Daniel

u suck
20 looks.. how come people look but don't download.. atleast not comment.. if it suck.. say so atleast

offcourse, it might not be your style.. dunno what style it is myself, but a friend that listened to it thought it was kind of psy, trance and house if i remember correctly.. i suck at genres so i have no idea.

___________________
Daniel

simmer down

Song had cool effects, just not a very nice thing to listen to. Some annoying samples.

___________________
The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.

quote:

Originally posted by davinox simmer down Song had cool effects, just not a very nice thing to listen to. Some annoying samples.

than's
that was actually kinda what i wanted

___________________
Daniel

What you have here is an excellent basis of a tune. Somehow it just feels rather simplistic and empty.

Throughout the track I was expecting some kind of hook that would had grabbed my attention but it never happened. On the positive side, since the track was relatively short it didn't manage to bore me either.

What I'd really like to hear would be more percussions... and I don't mean "regular" hihats and stuff, I mean something more obscure - I think it'd fit the track well.

Oh, and that sub-bass nearly killed my speakers

___________________
Latest releases:
Endless Cycles [Capital Heaven]
The Charlatan [Morphosis]

Listening now.

What are those sounds called, "hoovers"?
I like them, but they go on for too long and there's no real melody.

But as Mr. Mystery said, you have a good base from which to continue forming the track..

___________________

Download all my EuroHardTrance traxx & learn more about me ("Kompulsor"):
www.kompulsor.com

quote:

Originally posted by Mr.Mystery What you have here is an excellent basis of a tune. Somehow it just feels rather simplistic and empty. Throughout the track I was expecting some kind of hook that would had grabbed my attention but it never happened. On the positive side, since the track was relatively short it didn't manage to bore me either. What I'd really like to hear would be more percussions... and I don't mean "regular" hihats and stuff, I mean something more obscure - I think it'd fit the track well. Oh, and that sub-bass nearly killed my speakers

thank's for teh comment
more percussions you think... yeah, probably would work.. will try and put some more in it... yeah, the bass could probably be stronger.... it worked pretty good in my headphones, but when i listened on it for the first time on my speakers today it sounded really weak... will make it a bit heavier

and eugene... about the melodie, i know it isn't really a melodie, but that was kinda what i went for.

but i will see what i can do to grab your attention mystery

___________________
Daniel