And tell me your opinion. It's a sample i've created with Fruity Loops (yeah, I have nothing else but this lame software )

How can I make it better?
Thx

hey!!! it sounds awsome!!!! the ONLY thing i could say that u could do is turn down the master volume a "bit" to get rid of da distortion... then again, it should be this SHITTTTTT stereo.... :0)
anyhow!... when ure done, i wanna hear it all...ok?!!?!

Great sample, I've worked with Fruityloops too. You have to try Propellorhead's Reason........ That works very cool and i've had maked some cool tracks with it!!!!!

Thanks guys for the answers (and even so fast )

I'll try to "fix" it. I didn't even insert all the channels, well just a sample, and as i learned I shouldn't stuff samples too much

I dunno if I ever get done with one track. I'm never happy with them

But I'll post it if you'd like when I'm finished.

Further criticisms are still very welcome

Thanks again

PS: What do you mean by Propellorhead's Reason?

You can download a trial version at: http://www.propellerheads.se/index.php3 I've tried the trial version and bought after that the original program!!! It's Great!!!!!

Sounds nice, I like the melody around 0:19... Like every-1 said, slow it down a bit, turn down the master volume, and I dont know what else but something is missing. If you put whats missing in the tune would sound pretty good .

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naaa... i quite like the speed!!! i say make it faster!!!! OHHHYEAH!!! fast hard shit!!! mmmmmmm