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JayL -Primitive Emotions
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| DC- |
7 days and not a single response. Cmon people what the hell is the matter with you all? :)
Anyway I took the time to listen to the track.
I really dig some elements. I am not too fond of the way you started out the track with those pads (I don't quite like that organy sound), but the bassline, percussion intro that followed afterwards was good.
I'm not sure whats going on with that kick, sounds like its got reverb on it? I would choose a different kick (like during the intro stage).
The pianos are nice, but I didn't like the pads as much (mostly the sound). The melody you got is pretty good, I like it, I would personally have given it a little less stereo seperation. The main melody reminds me a bit of older trance which is always nice :) You followed it up again with that organ pad which I mentioned I don't like.
I would have perhaps built it up a little differently than you have, but hey, each to his own right?
Overall not too bad of a track, with a few changes here and there, you could make something quite good out of it! |
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| nic01445 |
| Interesting intro. I actually enjoy the "organ" sounds. i think it gives the track a nice tone. I'm really diggin the piano. I can hear the lead...only sometimes. I would recommend reallllly bringing that out. The synth could use some beef. It isn't bland, but it sure is weak. Don't get me wrong, the notes are fine. Even the sample works. Just needs some VOLUME and some tweaking. Keep workin man. |
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| kewlness |
wow.. thx for the replies guys.. :)
thanks for all the helpful comments and criticisms...
i'll work on it |
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