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Please review my new track
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| MeiX |
It is kina different from standard trance tracks.
I guess the right genre for this would be chill trance or smth.
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| MeiX |
| i guess world is not ready for my music. |
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| Flotser |
Hey man, I realy love your track
I like the melodies, and i like the sounds
only thing disturbed me , was at 2:30 (and in the second time too), when suddenly the kick & bass enter.. IMO you have to create some kind of intro for their entrance, you made a little revresed crash (or whatever) before the kicks start, but its realy not enough. i say make a much longer "whoooooooooooooshhhhh" sound or something instead
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but its gr8 man |
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| Flotser |
I just think.....
That each an every comments helps alot to an amatur (like myself), and even more it helps to a pro that understands everything well.. . and you guys shouldn't only give feedback on stuff that you know 100% that should sound good.
please give MeiX (and myself next time) more comments,
sorry I'm talking in the name of Meix...
but for me it wasn't fun getting 2 reviews on the 3 tracks i posted here..... |
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| Shorty |
This is what i like to see, a good tough and driving tune. Right up my street mate. Like flotser said though the kick comes in to sudden, A nice build up would help the track get back up and running rather than just rather than just one reverse crash.
Well done mate I wouldn't mind hearing a few more like these mate. Good Work. |
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| JoEst |
Just gave it a try and i was like - WOW!
I Love it, the main melody builds so well, very deep and emotional, reminds me a bit of Second Sun..
I dont know why were the other mates complaining about the bass kicking in roughly, it worked fine for me :cool:
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| azone |
I like the composition. Nice song.
I thought that the kick drum is too weak at 60Hz and 120Hz. You have a deep bassline so maybe you're trying not to get the two fighting each other - which is understandable. I would bring the bassline down a tad and the kick drum up a couple dB for sure. Also I thought the track had too much in the octave up around 8kHz. I would bring this area down at least a couple dB (just the octave around 8kHz). Lastly I would use a multiband limiter like the one T-racks to bring out the low end and bring the track alive. maybe a threshold of 2.5dB on the low band (below 160Hz), nothing in the mid, and maybe a threshold of 0.8dB or so in the high band (above 10kHz). Release time around 400ms.
I like the track. good luck. |
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| extalin |
i like the musical content of this song a whole lot. good job on that.
the technical aspect is not too bad, but it could use some work (sounds like you are using reason?). i think you should raise the drums and turn down the bass some. work on the synth for the bass some and try to get it to sound 'tighter' if you know what i mean and mess with the setting to try to get a better sounding bass synth (turn the lows down on it some). eq the delaying synth so it doesnt have quite as much midrange and has so more highs - high mids. the wailing pitch sliding synth sounds good except id make it louder. the other synths need to be turned up as well. i dont hear any high hats really, i dont know if you just dont want them, but i think some more drum programming would be good for it.
once again i really do like this track and id like to hear it again if and when you work on it some more and get it sounding a little better. keep up the good work. |
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| MeiX |
Ok, thanx for feedback
i'll see what i can do. Mastering is not my best side. |
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| trancearmada |
| just listened to it breefly, very impressive... |
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| azone |
| MeiX, definitely spend some time on the finished product and upload this song again. As I mentioned before this song is really good and I want to hear it again. |
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