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A Song I made, feedback welcome!
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| starsurfer |
hi everyone,
been age since I posted here.
I thought I would post this song in here.. which I also put in the production forum. Let me know what you think! Cheers
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Hi everyone,
its been ages since I uploaded a new song, but I have finally finished my newest track.
it is a fully uplifting melodic track, lots of energy and power in this one, with one major break down and build up, and two minor breakdowns.
please let me know your thoughts. I would love feedback. Hate it? love it? not so sure?
here is the song:
Artist: STARSURFER
Song: THE GATES OF VAGA
Url: http://www.pendarand.com/starsurfer...gatesofvaga.mp3
cheers
Starsurfer (aka - Pendulum)
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| Rememberence_ |
| This sounds quite ameture, not that that's a bad thing starsurfer, if there's no room for improvement then what fun would it be? I think the track's concept, layout, and layers are very good. Obviously what needs working on here is your sound, it doesn't seem as though much effort was put in, in attention to detail of your synths and your beats... refinement is what this needs. Are you going to spend more time on it? |
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| starsurfer |
thanks for the feedback dude. Its my best effort so far.. and least amatuerish of them all.. so I am glad you have not heard my older songs hehe.
yes, the synths need work. What would your suggestions be?
Main synth? what about the drums?
please, be specific, and I am sure I can make the necessary changes.
I am working in Reason 2.. and I only have a midi keyboard.. nothing else .. hehe.. so, my sound is representative of my equipment also.... but no excuses, I am still learning.. and you are right... the fact that there is room for improvement is a good thing!
Starsurfer (Pendulum) |
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| bragi |
Hmmm... I tried to download the song, but I can't seem to do a DNS lookup on the site :(
Will try more fiddling. Anyone else having trouble getting to the link?
-b |
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| starsurfer |
Yeah sorry guys. I picked a bad time to upload a song to my web server. Having the DNS settings and hosting all switched over.. . should be done by tomorrow night. I will give you a new URL when it is up!
Cheers
Starsurfer |
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