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Darren Tate Vs Jono Grant - Let the Light Shine In (jmf remix) - feedback wanted!!
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| JMF [TrAcId] |
OK, i posted a work in progress for some feedback at the beginning of last week, and only got one reply :(
well the mix is now finished, and i would really like to hear some feedback from you people as this is only my second production and i really want to be able to improve my production skills.
download here
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| Endre |
well, you should try to work more on extra sounds and FX on the track, and work more on the breakdowns. otherwise the idea is good.
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| Johnypeb |
| You should send it to [email protected]. They may be interested? Just a thought. |
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| JMF [TrAcId] |
Thanks for the replies - anyone got any more??
Endre> i'll bear in mind what you have said :) like i metioned before i'm still very new to this, and i'm not sure how to get all the sounds i want yet, so creating remixes/remakes at this early stage is my way of learning the ropes :) |
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| mantisnl |
| the basics are there man, sounds very good, 2 bad u didn`t use fx on things:( |
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| tu_face |
first off i really dont like the kick ur using :) it sounds a bit wierd to me..
this is very good considering this is some of you first work.. that synth u have at 2:50 and the lead synths in general after that bit (3:36ish) all sound a bit raw and unfukked with, maybe give them some more fx (namely filter them so they rnt so shrill) and u definatly need to compress them :)
i also think the tune takes a while to get anywhere, and then when it gets there, it stays there for too long if u get what i mean :)
and those that said the tune needs more sound FX and little swooshy bits are right too.
if u work on this right it could be a really good remix.. i really like the bit where u miss the kicks out, to give it a hint of breakyness.
ur doing the right things mate, keep doing them ;) |
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| JMF [TrAcId] |
thanks, some useful comments :)
as for the kick drum, at first i really liked it - but the more i hear it the less i like it - it has a pretty low sound, i need to bring out some top end in it. and the lead synths are my main sticking point - i just cannot get that sound i have in my head - if you know what i mean. I'll stick with it though :whip: |
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