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Melodic/Hard Trance Track: "Mind of a Turkish Soldier"
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| DJ-AXI |
Hey all, wrote this track almost about a few days ago.
It's called "Mind of a Turkish Soldier" Contributing to all the Turkish Soldiers who fought for their country and Died for their country in the world war 1..
I think it is Probably too Hard to be a dedicated track to ww1 as it is pretty hard, but melodically constructed, but i feel that the melody might bring in a few moments of it into our mind..
Other then that, let me know what you think, it sitll isnt finnished still trying to get some sound clips of the soldiers having war and otehr vocals into it and some more melodies to support the main line id say it is yet to be complete and still under construction.. But so far it is just the rough 12" edit for you guys :)
What do you reckon of it as a tribunal trance track to the ww1, and any honest votes and comments out of /10 possibly?
Link: http://www.sectionz.com/detail.asp?rtype=mp3&szid=7982
Hope to hear! Thanks again!
- Peace & Respects - DJ Axi. |
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| S2K |
I'm liking this track!
It definitely has the right feel to it, emotion wise, kinda desperate, dramatic feel which is suited to the theme.
I do have some suggestions though...
The track could overall do with a few more elements. It's all a bit bland, perhaps add some more melodies here and there.
Secondly, the break is perhaps a little too long and becomes slightly boring.
You have good elements here, I must say your snare rolls were nice, and use of vocal good. |
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| DJ-AXI |
Thanks S2K, appreciate your time man!
Yeah It was the UNComplete Version, put it up so i could get more idea's and or suggestions!
Thanks again man, im looking into some more elements and idea's trying to give it a more of a real emotional feel with more melodies or so i will try to write for this!!
Thanks S2k!! |
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| DJ F0cus |
Generally it's nice, but it's only a base for a track in my opinion
The intro is damn too long without any changes. If I was you, i'd add some strings if you insist on keeping the intro so long.
The melody is good but simple, try first of all to add more 'release' to the synth over time so in the end it will be more of a pad. Adding another melody or two with a proper bassline would add a lot. A string along the main melody will do.
Decrease the bpm a bit btw :)
Keep up the good work!
- Alex. |
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| DJ-AXI |
Yeah true! It's a 12" version for a start so its long its long.. !
Thanks for the other ideas/suggestions/comments ...ive done a few more additions and added dew more lines strings also :)) Sounds great i can feel so far!
I'll see how it goes i mite put the updated version up later, but other then that! THanks for the time man!
Cheers! Axi! |
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