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| DJ Pete |
| I will have a listen to it in the morning for you off to bed now .:rolleyes: :p ;) :D :o |
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| tu_face |
im dlin/listenin to it now, i got just over 5 mins of it.. and i must say the start is very, very, very cool ;) only one snot to pick though, the breakdown bit should maybe come a few bars earlier :) ooh... here we go... nice breakdown! i think it could do without that bass-line coming in there.. maybe a tad later... DOH! it cut out just before it kicked up!! That always happens...
ill let u know what i think of the whole thing when ive got it all (ty 56k) ;) but up to yet its gettin a good 7 or 8/10.. very nice, very uplifting.. i think the TA peepz will like it.
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| tu_face |
ok ive listened to it all now, i still think that bassline comes in a bit early on that breakdown ;) and towards the end it doesnt seem to fit anymore, but all in all its scored a 7.5 on the tune-o-meter... great track, progresses wonderfully. U wont be embarassing urself in front of platipus and the likes...
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| yia |
thank you for the kind words =D
i think i will make it shorter. do you refer to the off-beat bassline, or the acidic bassline?
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| tu_face |
the off beat one at the end of the tune... at the very end on the final beat from about the 9 minute mark :)
what i mean about it not fitting anymore is the notes dont seem to go together anymore.. dunno why, maybe u need to either drop it a few notes completely or phase it down a bit :) just for the ending though the first bit sounds fine as it is ;)
i dont use buzz though sorry :|
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