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DJ Tiesto - Nyana (Broken Toy Remix - Sample)
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raditz
Hey all, i've been playing around a little with reason, and out of nowhere I steped into a melody similar to nyana, so I decided to attempt to make a remix of it. Here's a little sample:

http://www.trancefussion.com/mp3s/nyana.mp3

Obviously it's not completed yet, hell I barely have the begining ready. Just wanted to put it here so I may gather some opinions, as everyone I tell about are just like ... blah.

Any feedback, please?
DJ_NRG
Well, not being a producer, I can never really say what I think should be done with a track...I can only say if I like it or not.

And this is a track that I think I could dig on, once its completed. Seems to have a good feel to it.

Sorry, I couldn't get more in depth for you, but its the best I can do. Keep working on it. :D
raditz
thanks a lot, all I need is simply opinions, yours pretty much does it, and it helps. I'm still on the work, as I just started with it like 2 hours ago. I'll post more samples once I have more parts of the song. Thanks!
[nils]
hey!

ok, here we go:
imo the track sounds just a bit to simple. more stuff perhaps? like... i dunno, stuff :) perhaps a more disted lead in the background with it's freq going up n down? and more percussion! more hats n stuff, u know? i really dig the clap and the bass. the bassline is very, very nice! like the "bounce" of it

the "main" sound which appears at 0.56: more effekts, like reverb, echo, eq and perhaps a compressor to make it sound more... compact, but still... spread(? spellcheck, please). it sounds abit to simple and booring, to be totally honest. otherwise the track has, as mentioned, a very good feel to it. so just work on it :) go, baby, go!

:D
The Master
beatiful! please finish it!
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